Needless to announce,
the narrator of this reminiscence
was a narcissist.
Nasty and narrow-minded,
he navigated through my nerves
and nibbled on my neccessities.
Next to needling normality,
he was a notch higher in nosiness,
knowing that nothing nettled
my endurance more than a
no-good scoundral
nurturing my numbness.
Here's a newsflash
[note it down]
you are a
nuisance,
leave
now.
Author notes
Username: Never Fall in Love
Task: N
Where I couldn't alliterate, the 'n' sound was prominent in the word.
Note: Background is navy blue
Next note: I don't want to hear a word beginning with 'n' for a week.
A contest entry
- 26 Poets by JustAnotherIdoit.
600 points, ended April 20, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Now you tell me:
Comments
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Simple and to the point. Hope he followed.
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Nice
Great job on this piece and best of luck in the contest!
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lol at your author's comment. I was thinking while I was reading "what's with all the n words?" You know what though, you pulled it off. It's a great poem, I love your last line. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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lol, mirror reflections!
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I do like the alliteration.
I like this bit best 'and nibbled on my neccessities.'.Makes me laugh, then stop laughing and think about it. Then I laugh at my thoughts, then stop laughing and think about them.. this could go on and on. You're a wonderful poet. I prefer to read rhymey poems cos I do, but I like your unrhymey ones because you're good at it x
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Haha that is pretty fit!!!
Gosh can't believe I haven't read any of your writes since like 2007!!!!! Sooo long but they're getting better and better
Keep it up
lyl x x x
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NO!...
N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N N n n n n n n n n n
No never no!! "Nibbled on my necessities? May I?...ian.
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Whoohoo. I love poems of attitude sometimes. There are sometimes I wish I could tell my family you are nuisance leave now lol you did great with this and something we can all really relate to!
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You did very well considering the prompt you were given. This couldn't have been easy =/
"Next to needling normality,
he was a notch higher in nosiness,
knowing that nothing nettled
my endurance more than a
no-good scoundral
nurturing my numbness"
I liked these lines best.
Very good write.
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Your letter is N.
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