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Backyard (Karl Weiss - Topaz)



Beautiful bursting blossom
behold babies breath
Blessed by bumble bee
bittersweet bags brimming
Boisterous blackbird bathes
beneath bent blooming bough
Breathtaking breeze brushes
blackberry bush borders
Behold backyard brilliance
beside burbling blue brook


















Author notes

Karl Weiss - Topaz my letter is-B

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    Very nicely done, and the images are quite coherent. Good creative writing!

    Dennis


  • poppa
    March 27, 2008
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    awesome Karl.....love it....great wordplay
    cheers
    Rob


  • PatheticKt
    March 23, 2008

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    wow, all the words starting with letter 'B'.
    difficult to pen like this and it must've been
    worthy to do that and at the same time have a beautiful piece for everyone to read ^^
    good luck in the contest! =]


  • Unsigned gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    Really nice.....B.....

    Because beauty bequeaths beauty...

    I love your work Karl it is alway so full of melody and simple charm.....wonderful.

    Simon

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    This is great you did a nice job using only the letter B.Goodluck in the contest best wishes and much luck always


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    March 23, 2008

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    This is beautiful. Thanks so much for taking the effort and entering.


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    March 20, 2008
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    Your letter is B.


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    March 20, 2008
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    Can you make your title your username, please?

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