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Hurt

i look in to your eyes, then you look into mine,
You whisper in my ear, you say that you leaving,
I ask why, then i start to cry,
He says "don't cry" Its not you its me,
I cry even harder at the thought he wont be in my life,
He said we will be friends,
but i call, and write, and try to see him, and he slams the door in my face,
I knock again but there is someone else in the room,
I cry as i leave never to talk to him again

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  • abebassistdog
    April 29, 2008
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    love it


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    April 8, 2008

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    that is so sad
    and what makes it hard to read is really this happends
    great write sweetie i am sorry for your hurt
    hope things get better love much


  • princessofthenight
    March 20, 2008
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    wow i know all to well how that feels. This poem is great


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    March 20, 2008
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    Your letter is G.


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    March 20, 2008
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    Ummm. user name in you AN and title, please.

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