The sound of traffic is interrupted
only to be replaced by the screams
of the unholy holy loudspeaker
The mullah glorifies
the name of his authority figure
and painlessly kills his own existence
The microphone pisses as far as it can
and marks its slave-territory
Spineless theists
stoop low
to glorify the pissing messiah
Had Van Gogh been listening,
he would have cut his other ear too.
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Comments
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it is a bit too radical.....i dont quite agree to the viewpoint u have presented here. love the ending......it is an interesting refrence to make.
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u wd hv agreed if u lived near a mosque.......idiots dont let me live in peace!
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I love the wording here and the choice of words. Both are stunning. lOve this part above all:
The sound of traffic is interrupted
only to be replaced by the screams
of the unholy holy loudspeaker
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LOL!
Bravo!






