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Loudspeaker

The sound of traffic is interrupted
only to be replaced by the screams
of the unholy holy loudspeaker

The mullah glorifies
the name of his authority figure
and painlessly kills his own existence

The microphone pisses as far as it can
and marks its slave-territory

Spineless theists
stoop low
to glorify the pissing messiah

Had Van Gogh been listening,
he would have cut his other ear too.

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  • scarlettohara
    March 28, 2008
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    it is a bit too radical.....i dont quite agree to the viewpoint u have presented here. love the ending......it is an interesting refrence to make.


    • Laughing Buddh
      March 28, 2008
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      u wd hv agreed if u lived near a mosque.......idiots dont let me live in peace!


  • Blooming Poet
    March 22, 2008
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    I love the wording here and the choice of words. Both are stunning. lOve this part above all:

    The sound of traffic is interrupted
    only to be replaced by the screams
    of the unholy holy loudspeaker


  • Raazi
    March 20, 2008
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    LOL!
    Bravo!