Delirium;
Delusions drift: dandelionseed,
dancing delicately, dew inside dusk.
Drunk;
deeply drinking death.
Dazed dialect, slurred dispute.
Dawn, dormant desires develop,
deceiving dignity.
Drugged;
Damned discontented dementia.
Delightful dizzy dreaming:
dripping down daisies,
drowning, dissolved amid dirt.
Death deceives:
deadly desserts deal
addicted Dalia's destruction.
Author notes
Gl1tt3rn1nj4. "A Beautiful Lie" - Option number one, yup yup.
Ah, this was very tough. I tried my best to use no extra words, but I did... so I used extra words that had D's in them, you know, keep the same sound.
Hard but I'm happy with it. ^^
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Comments
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WOw... Amazing. Really is. So disconnected, but that really worked for this poem.
Excellent work. -
wow great job. you did great!
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Thank you ^^ Very interesting and challenging contest.
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Your letter is D.
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