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as I look in the mirror

As I look in the mirror


The girl inside pulls away from her shadow and
lays it to rest once more before the events of tomorrow
take over.

Another day of destruction to the hopeless,
more pride to the ones whom do not need it.


Fire melts and ice burns,
as does the emotions one shows when they are afraid to be seen by the real world.


This is what I see in the mirror

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  • individuality gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    a good piece here though perhaps think of changing the layout? the presentation would be much better if you broke the lines up a little