I don't miss missing you,
Because I'm missing you still,
I miss understanding,
Because I never will.
I miss holding you,
But I'm still holding on,
I'm trying so hard,
But this feelings so strong.
I'm loving you,
And with passion, it’s hated.
Who would have thought?
We'd be this ill-fated.
I'm craving you,
And I yearn not to crave,
And I'm trying, I swear,
But I still misbehave.
You’re no longer mine,
But to me you belong,
And I’m still yours,
Like the rhythm’s the songs.
The core and the apple,
The sky and the sun,
I revolve around you,
You’re where I begun.
Now we’re are finished,
I don’t know where to start,
Without out you I’m lost,
Smashed heart, missing parts.
A contest entry
- My 50th contest for rhyming poems... 20 poets, 790 points by Manoj Sanyal.
700 points, ended March 27, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It is painful emotions from heart.
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I love how this is full of oxymoronic implications: "you're no longer mine, but to me you belong" for example. The speaker seems somewhat confused and sad, yet the poem is clearly stated. The last line is fantastic- really drives it home.
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