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spring haiku


tentative new growth

ending cold embracing warmth

daffodils will bloom

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Author notes

prompt: celebrate Spring

A contest entry

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  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    You have captured some lovely Spring images and interesting contrast on line 2.The first line and third line speak in an anticipatory view and not in the actual witness of these events. Thanks for your entry into this contest.

    Dennis

    • carole21
      March 26, 2008
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      thanks

      thanks for your comments . . it is actually only the third line that is anticipatory . . the tentative new growth has begun . . thus blooms eventually . . appreciate the applause . .


  • BellaD
    March 20, 2008

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    Love it!

    A beautiful haiku about the coming of spring. I am especially partial to daffodils which made it all the more lovely to me.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 20, 2008
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    Beautiful, your Haiku has brought spring to life. Good luck in the contest with it


  • Chrissy03
    March 20, 2008
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    Nice haiku.


  • Candy6
    March 20, 2008
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    Nice haiku about the spring.

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