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Haunting Past


Ghosts of the past appear
stone cold
These faint sad shadows
of my past
They have haunted me since
the days of old
Beloved lives that were never
meant to last
Lives that were cut far to short
much to fast







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  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 24, 2008

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    I like the last two lines the best I love how you have used the prompt... touching and sadly sweet - good luck in the contest!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • elemental angel
    March 20, 2008
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    A good take on the prompt
    Bravo