while
cherry-blossoms
fill my eyes
my heart
pitter-patters
to a sparrows song
and I pick daisies-
…she put in her hair
just read,
a Namita poem
Happy Birthday Poetess Namita
A contest entry
- Flowers for her hair by tara wilson.
2250 points, ended April 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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what a lovely little daisy poem for Namita's hair....love this...thanks for joining our little party,....
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"pitter-patters to a sparrow song"
I love that line, Mally! You've written a lovely poem for the lovely Namita and I see that she loves this one.
Thank you for this flower for her hair!
~ Nicolette
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WOOOW! Mal, this is too beautiful!! You're just so kind... this will stay in my heart till it dies and even after it does... love you, Mal!
- namita
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How gorgeous! This is a lovely tribute. Comparing someone's words to daisies. I love this. There is not one single poem of yours that I have not found to be exquisitely crafted. Good luck in the contest.
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How beautiful are your words that float through the readers mind and roll gentle across ones lips...you are a brillant and loving soul...what a wonderful and toughing birthday wish...
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You have such a beautiful heart. Now you have peaked my curiosity to read her poetry. I know how much nature means to you. You have such a natural way of saying Happy Birthday! Best wishes!
Shana
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Ah..what a precious what to honor someone on their birthday. A beautiful poem for a friend is a treasured gift. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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