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Nature's Crowning Glory.

Weave daisies

unplucked

by lover's

seeking solace,

in "He loves me...

....loves me not,"chants

entwined with

lovely braids,

of forget-me-nots

to symbolize the

blossoming of your youth.


Dance brightly amidst

the dulls of the world

on this your day of birth,

for you are

but a sprout

reaching skyward.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis


 

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  • tara wilson gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    "Dance brightly amidst

    the dulls of the world

    on this your day of birth,

    for you are

    but a sprout

    reaching skyward."

    I love this so much, what beautiful birthday wishes...thanks so much for joining the party, Artis.


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    This is lovely!! I liked the way the words seem to drift down the page...like flower petals in the wind. The last few lines just made themselves sit in my eyes. I liked the sincerity of voice here too - something so very peaceful about this poem.

    Thank you for this poetic flower you've written for Namita.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Namita
    March 28, 2008

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    This is such a lovely poem! Thank you so much for your kindness... This really touched me...! Thank you.

    - namita