Vampires loom here, among the ashes,
where bodies lie torn, wrapped in gashes.
Their blissful obscurity twines in every breath,
their unknown presence marked only by death.
They embrace every soul with their midnight kisses,
Leaving nothing behind but empty wishes.
Author notes
TITLES: Midnight kisses
A contest entry
- Options, Prompts, Titles, and a picture by my1lovewearsdiapers.
600 points, ended April 1, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol dis vlippen goed. Nie ek like nogal die beeldspraak. dis cul
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Lol, Lag jy vir my vampire poem? Hehe dis fun!
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Usually rhyme is forced out, but I've never seen such flow in rhyme as I do here. Wonderful piece.
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This is a nice write and an interesting take for the title. Thank you for the entry and best of luck. ~T~
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