captured
in my dog’s eye
the moon
painting
my dog in silver
the moon
my garden
painted in silver
a howling dog
visiting
the moon in a pond
my dog
silver dog
visiting the moon
a pond
Author notes
inspired by gaze's haiku-sequence "about dogs and moons" http://allpoetry.com/poem/3962617
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Each one stands alone, and they can be sundered and reassembled in any order. Each one is a perfect autumn haiku. Scatter them round the page!
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Bonding with man's best friend. I love this and I admire your love for critters.
Love,
Amera
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Ah, didn't you post these as comments on GazeGoes haiku or something, or am I just thinking of her haiku? I could click on the link you provided but I am too lazy.
Ok, I went and looked, I re-read the ones I wrote there too...I'm weird...it's safe to say I won't be posting those anytime soon.
I think I like number three the best, it gives a great picture of the moonlit night, and that annoying dog my neighbor lets out to howl all night.
dog howling
at moon
shotgun blast
I just wrote the first haiku that foretells the future.
You are a natural and take to haiku like a dog to water, or is that a fish to water, or a fish to the moon...or me to Moxie...that would be the one.
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Oh, you have them posted!
You weren't taking classes when you wrote those, you just have haiku inside of you, natural talent
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Headlines: Dog lapps up moon!
Interesting elements in this collection of haiku scenarios, dog, moon and pond. I see you have advanced in your haiku writing, eliminating unnecessary word yet conveying full picture images. Well Done!
Your humble haijin friend, Dennis
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taking my second haiku-class at the moment, haikumonk is an amazing teacher (and so was lotusoflakshmi) ...
I am still not going full way towards originality, but hope that once I learn the basic steps, I will dare to pirouette like crazy ...
thank you for stopping by,
your sisterly friend marion
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