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Awakening

Swimming
A sticky fluid
              honey
Oh it's
so indulgent

It's the
sun
radiant and
Explosive
        on
        mute

Smiles
They feel it?
              on mute

Follow the tune
a tear
a rip
the seam
              breaks

So soft
Caressing
          it's only
emotion

In darkness
an
electronic glow

I implode

Author notes

god I feel amazing right now
I feel so "awake"
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  • Cupcake-love
    April 10, 2008
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    Wow this is awesome. You write everything so elegantly.