A thin wind wavered
green blade of grass
one among many
valiantly struggling
after winters worst
burdened at the tip
by a speck of dew
that shimmered
a thousand shades
of rainbow colors
caught my eye
and brought a smile
and a sigh...
Please tell me what you think
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bravo
Very nicely and very deftly done poem about Spring. I enjoyed this poem a great dead, indeed! (one humble suggestion: I think it would be an advantage to have the poem single-spaced rather than double-spaced.) bravo.... bravo... -
Lovely phrase "a thin wind"...Shows how beautiful burdens
can be. Another spring ..imagine that
Enjoyed this little pearl
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Great beauty in these wonderful lines
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