Can you hear me?
I can hear you
Your cries echo
Throughout the whole room.
Can you see me?
I can see you
Your tears glisten
Like the stars near the moon.
Can you feel me?
I can feel you
Your cold hands tremble
Throughout the winter noon.
Do you love me?
I love you
The bond we share between us
Is forever true.
A contest entry
- Celabration! Who wants to win 3000 points? by Mori-lux.
3060 points, ended March 29, 2008, 46 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Does Passion equal Love? by sapphireangelwings.
450 points, ended May 1, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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Wow! So deeply moving and the imagery was wonderful. Nice job and good luck.
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wonderful! The last line had a lovely bite of emotion, and you used a great rithem. good job
good luck
thanks for entering
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