Circling around the mournful woman
The wind howls with laughter
It picks up the leaves and hurls them at her
Her world is officially over.
The woman tumbles to her fall in a desperate plea
And reflects on her personal experiences
She can't believe she's come to this
And cries a river of consequences.
She grieves for the life she never had
A life full of wonder and mischief
She regrets her time spent on useless matters
She appears extremely pessimistic.
She suddenly stands up from her fallen position
And picks up the tormenting leaves
Her yearning of a better life starts forming
And that's when she walks away and leaves.
The woman becomes optimistic and brave
Taking on the world's most daring challenges
She then starts to form very close friendships
With generous neighbours and even strangers.
She bonds with the leaves who mocked her downfall
And cares about the earth's nature
That's when she makes a deal with the leaves
And takes the role of kind Mother Nature.
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Comments
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cute I was wondering at the begining of this weather she was the emboddiement of mothernature. Good job I like the way her persona changes like the seasons.
Good luck thanks 4 entering

