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Spring Messenger



Cautiously opened curtains
revealed broken branches
from a wet and windy night.
But sunrise lit my garden
and lay among the debris.
Golden coins of celendine
the lesser sort, smiled back.



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  • Merciful-Manner
    April 29, 2008

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    I like this

    I like this poem very much. It's a very good write, I normally don't like poetry about spring or anything. But I actually liked this poem Great job.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    March 20, 2008

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    A beautiful vision of the welcome and long awaited Spring morning. Thanks for dharing this lovely poem.

    Dennis