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Summer Forest

Babbling brook flows,

Crickets eat fresh grass plainly,

I feel alive now.

A contest entry

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    June 10, 2008
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    A nice write makes a very good Haiku.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest


  • dustookie2
    March 20, 2008
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    So esay to get lost inside this poem...Your title and introduction set up the atmosphere enticing me to play.I do like the shorter poetic form you have to make all the words count. a summer breeze late afternoon... soothes the soul. Thank you for the pleasure.


    • Amergin
      March 20, 2008
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      Your welcome! Thanks for reading and the applause!