Can you hear me?
I can hear you
Your cries echo
Throughout the whole room.
Can you see me?
I can see you
Your tears glisten
Like the stars near the moon.
Can you feel me?
I can feel you
Your cold hands tremble
Throughout the winter noon.
Do you love me?
I love you
The bond we share between us
Is forever true.
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Heart by SchizoChic.
600 points, ended March 20, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Nice entry. Best of luck.
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So light and beautiful. Best of luck.
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