Through this jungle of expression
I leapt
to find you
sighing between daisies and sunshine
painting my life
with your soul;
and I counted fingers
running out of moments
where you changed me ~
with ribbons
bound to your grace
left tied
upon this moment
breathing you in ~
softly...
A contest entry
- Flowers for her hair by tara wilson.
2250 points, ended April 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"sighing between daisies and sunshine
painting my life
with your soul;"
this is gorgeous & so perfect for Namita....thanks for joining our little party here...
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This is so very beautiful... it whispers like water over stone or wind rustling through petals and leaves. You had my attention from the very first line. I really liked this one.
Thank you for writing this for Namita.
~ Nicolette
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oh this is so beautiful and the way that you have giving it such a beautiful and caring feel its amazing well done mummy
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Wowwowwow... thank you so much Donna. You just made me cry with this one... you're such a beautiful soul; I'm honoured. Thank you so very much, love you
And I'm honoured to be your friend.
Luv,
Namita
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