Burning
In the corners of my heart
Churning
The waters of my soul
Yearning
To feel your body beside mine
Learning
What it truly means to love
Wanting
To feel your steady breathing against my neck
Needing
To feel the warmth of your love
Reading
My thoughts, you move closer to me
Treading
Carefully through my mind
Seeing
My unparalleled love
Beleiving
In our hearts that we are one
Trusting
In our love for each other, we lay down
Sleeping
We let rest overtake us.
Author notes
when i wrote this my mind was blank, i just started writing and i have this wonderful peice to show for it.
what did you feel when you read this
Comments
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ooh my... beautiful!
And i agree with An Unwritten Truth, maybe u should write blindly more often, coz this was brillaint! i love the whole one-word-follwed-by-a-sentense structure!!! it was off the hook!
this is just lovely and i think many can relate to this! 
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wow...maybe you sould blindly right more often... this is one of your best poems, the poem warms the soul...very good write
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BREATH TAKING
Such a powerful over whelming love...sighs...your love flows strongly in each line and holds the heart of the reader captive...a wonderful peace to sleep beside the one you love so deeply Excellent! Niaish my Son for sharing with me
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