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You Hit It Or You Dont!

Sore and tired you want to call it quiet
But you love it you need it get up and try again
Your never going to get better if you stay down when you fall
So up once more you’re a star ready 5,6,7,8 your doing pretty great
Again and again you have to be perfect
There is no good enough in the dance world only
Perfect you hit or you don’t, I have to get it right
Practice and practice sore and tired I have no room to complain
Up once more after a hard fall I wont give up ill give it my all.

Author notes

So i love dance it is my life, but it gets old not hiting every step right, it gets old falling when trying a new bigger harder jump! and at times i just want to stay on the floor where i fell but then remeber "hello" i have to get back up, there is no good enough in dance its perfection!so i end up getting back up and falling again lol. but hey i got up!

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  • DestiniesTwined
    March 20, 2008
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    This is a great poem. I like it alot.