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shattered at the scene


Shattered hopes  still there is dreams
Endless tears enough to make a stream
Scares from the past love never last
Slowly breaths it’s a new day
Wishing and hoping for life to be ok
Lost and alone loved beyond care
I am not perfect but I will always be there
No room for lies id breakdown at the scene
Stitches and staples do you have a glue gun
Tragic has came my way and I don’t think it will be ok
Head up gorgeous you have to shine
Smile big pain will ease in time
I love you and sorrys note after note
I hope soon you chook on each and every lie
The whole time you were trying to keep me happy
Well look where that got us doll.

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    -Hugs-

    Just want you to know I'm glad to see you penning your emotions out my daughter dear, oh how I surely know, your soul is sincere. Stay tough, but let that ink forever flow healing from within. Peace, Dad. xo