Fingers trailing over silky skin
Slowly, gently, sliding in
Where to leave off, where to begin
Your love, your warmth, the sweetest sin
Warm moist mouth, sliding down
Hands splayed, turned around
Your screams, your moans the only sound
Your sanitys lost, pleasure found
My whispered sweet nothings coat the air
Hanging vulnerable without a care
Yet no response to be found anywhere
Was anything ever there?
An explosion of sweet ecstacy
As you loose yourself within me
Yet nothing cement seems to be
No response, no reaction for me to see
Can you feel my heartbeat racing, oh so fast
My love for you, unsurpassed
Wanting, craving this pleasure to last
Wondering if I'm living in the past
My confidence shattered, my pride at stake
Wondering how much rejection I can take
Just how much pleasure do you fake?
And how much longer can I stand this ache...
You shrug it off, it's just another trial
Dont realize you wallow in denial
Cant stand to move another mile
Wondering if this is worthwhile
I wish you'd show I make you feel
Something, anything that's real
Because I need to know I appeal
For me to ever be able to heal
Just let me be real.
Author notes
Okay so I know this really sucks. It's just sometimes I feel kind of unattractive and like my girlfriend gets bored of me, sexually. I dont know. Haha. I just needed to get it out.
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I really liked this. I don't think it sucks at all. I'm sorry that you are feeling unattractive, the best thing to do is to talk about it with your girlfriend...ask her what she wants you to do to her, that's always helped my girlfriend and me ;]
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Oh, it's like I know what she likes. But I wish she'd actually give me suggestions once in a while. Like I'm sure she gets tired of the same thing, and I try to like do different stuff. But if she's not suggesting, then I feel like I'm always the one making decisions and that's no fun.
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wow,well first of all it doesn't suck Miranda,you always think your pieces do but they don't...I have to say this is definitely the most personal piece I have seen from you,and I can understand why you had to get it out there...there are a lot of strong feelings yet lingering doubts in this,and that is normal...again I loved the rhyme scheme and flow,you never disappoint there...I miss talking to you as well and I honestly hope things are going well for you,drop me a line sometime it would be nice to hear from you ,I feel like we haven't talked in forever and the truth is we haven't...but nonetheless,great piece as usual...keep writing dearie,ttyl
~BCE~
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