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Sisters

Won't listen to me
She just needs to see
That we care,
That we love
She needs to look above
all the rain, all the gray
That there ar epeople who need to say
that they listen, try to help
at things she blabs out
but she won't hear
she won't come near
To people who love her hear
"Friends" as she calls
she defends at very fast pace
Even though they won't show her any grace
Sisters can be hard
Sisters can be tough
but even when it gets rough
you care about them
and that should be enough

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Alexandria Yazbek,
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A contest entry

Does this express what sisters really are?

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  • I'm a brutally honest person, so i'm going to be brutallt honest.
    I don't really like this poem. Nothing against you or the way it's written, i just don't like it.
    But thank you for entering my contest.
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