I like being together
with my family
to play cards
so to have fun
with everyone
even the pets
so lets play
together today
A contest entry
- Ages 14 and under: BEING TOGETHER! by Sky Prince Ireland.
600 points, ended March 31, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest for ages 14 and under:A poem you think you want to write or have written well! by pop123.
475 points, ended April 10, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ultimate Goal by N e a r.
20000 points, ended June 2, 2008, 946 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I am glad to see the judges know good poetry when they see it for this poem deserves all the trophies in the world. I absolutely love this one! I am all about family and this one gets tons of applause from me!
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wow
nathan great job you won gold on this contest, you are lucky i guess that means you are a better writer then me, keep up the great writing, love your mom -
This is a lovely poem,shows how close you are to your family
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very nice i like it
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your a great writer, i like this poem even if its not the way i told you to write it, that makes it even better cuss its yours, it still turnned out cute, keep writing, -love you mom
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Nathan7 your family really loves having you around. They love you so much that they dont know what they do with out you
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Sweet, a good peek inside family fun indeed! Reminds me of summer nights, BBQing and playing games with my folks when I was much, much younger.
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great
Wonderful, Nathan! I'm glad you and your family have fun together. Family time is so important for kids. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.
Brian
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