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The Gnomes Are Bored (Sicilian Tercets)

There they all sit, beneath the old oak tree
they're all just waiting, for something to do
so bored, they are, rather be filled with glee.

All of them left their broken wands at home
eyes are glazed over, from being tired
someone just has to cheer up these bored gnomes.

The Fairies are off playing their own games
unicorns standing tall under the sun
these poor gnomes are always being called names.

All they want to do, is join in on fun
laugh and play with unicorns and Fairies
then go to the beach, lay under the sun.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.18/2008

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I'm going through a little bit of writer's block right now, so this might suck.

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  • queen Moderators member
    March 25, 2008
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    Gnomes are tricky they are probably partying when you aren't looking


  • ckwriter69
    March 25, 2008

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    ahhh this doesn't suck. Very cute write. The poor gnomes, they just need to invent their own games to play. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 19, 2008

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    Sounds like me hehe bored lol This was great i liked the imagery too. If they are so bored they should go out and play anyway lol Great write

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    March 19, 2008

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    Cynthia: well, what a down day for the gnomes. In no time at all, you will see them up to their usual mischief and you WILL wish for today again. Cute write, my friend.

    Lady D