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Midnight Snack




Out by the picket fence the village of Dank lies
With little dwellings of limestone lit by fireflies
Creepy residents in this town have no real names
They are only known by their silly hopping games

Elves dwell beyond the flowers in a fallen log
At times I see them taking walks with a small dog
The dog is for protection from the neighbor's cat
Because she would surely eat them in nothing flat

The elves and the crickets live on separate streets
Patrolled by vicious shrews as they walk their beats
Rows of poison mushrooms mark the bounds of the hood
And consequences of straying are well understood

Crickets are really changelings from a dark star
Creatures of the night knowing not what they are
With eyes of twin moons and faces without noses
Playing songs with bowstrings on their little toesies

Waving antennae on top of their pointy faces
You can find them living in the deep dark places
They jump with little hops and do crickity things
And high on their backs are little dormant wings

Speaking with chirps of loud incessant chatters
Discussing elf food and other cricket matters
With shell so clear and thin they avoid the light
Only venturing out when the timing is right

At times when they are seeking food for themselves
They can become dinner for wayward hungry elves
Because elves also are creatures that rule the night
And they eat crickets and other bugs with delight

Elves have big ears with some supersonic hearing
Crickets are singing and don’t know they’re nearing
When the elves are on the prowl looking for a feed
If you are a cricket you had better take heed

So when crickets become quiet when the night is dense
Elves are having a snack out by the picket fence




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This is a poem that children and enchanted beings might enjoy
image credit:http://i104.photobucket.com/Fireflies_of_DOOM.jpg

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  • individuality gold member
    April 18

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    i fancy a snack myself right now lol it is haeding towards 4am for me and i have been flying about on mad wings for a time - a good elf poem - at christmas i always give laods of money to my little elf friend. well you have got to look after your elf haven't you lol


  • thepoetssoul
    March 20, 2008

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    The creative juices were flowing here.
    Wonderful imagery and wording indeed
    You did a awesome job on this poem
    Best of wishes to you.

    Tony


  • Dark Otter
    March 20, 2008

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    Wit, humor and creative

    This is the first one I read. It gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling and a large smile. What a happy read! Nice little universe and a creative spin. If I get more reads like this I'm gonna have to bring in co-judges. Well done!


    • malmadre gold member
      March 20, 2008
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      This was so much fun, I am so glad to be among kinfolk in the enchanted realm. Thank you for a nice welcome!