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Buds









Lost children
among dead branches
commit to winters dream









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Perception... As of right now... (this is the last.. that may change however)

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  • hollowriver
    April 20, 2008

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    the pic is wounderful and it fits in very well with the vivid discription

    keep up the good wor


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    This speaks volumes in so very few words. The imagery and emotions simply flow. Superbly penned


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 13, 2008

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    Wow. In just 9 words you created a world of emotion and imagery so flawlessly ...
    One of the best Haiku's I have ever had the honour of reading

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 22, 2008

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    Stunning visual you have created. Wonderful write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


  • DogFish silver member
    March 19, 2008

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    I like the notion of children amoung branches as buds,however, "Perception", you've lost me on the last line,"commit to winters dream". Perhaps to others it may be clearer.You do get a "clap", though, for the bud of a very interesting idea!

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