Pull me out
Of this darkness that entangles me,
Save me from
My despondent thoughts
Author notes
Blue-Eyed Vampyre
A contest entry
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Comments
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awww I know how it is to be stuck in these thoughts and ways, sorry to hear you've felt this pain too.
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Great write, your emotion is strong. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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this is a cool poem i like how you rolled something into thease short lines keep writing, -Amy
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You said so much in so few lines. This poem is in line with all the thoughts I hav ehad for quite some time. If I had no nightmare dreams I would not dream at all.
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Deeply expressive and profound... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.
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Wow! This is excellent!
It is so true how despondent thoughts pull you down into an entangling darkness that one often cannot escape on their own.
Those are the times it's so important to have people around that love you to help you back into the light.
Good luck in the contest!
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