Wake me from this painful sleep..
lost within a dream...
Make me live once again.
Author notes
prompt ~Pull me out from inside~ 15 words
A contest entry
- Prompting you... by Lavender Butterfly.
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such a short poem, but yet at the same time it says so much. That is not easy to do. Excellent use of 16 words. Good luck oin my contest as well as the others you have entered.
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So very sand and haunting, I hope you wake from the dreams you dread to dream. This is ad.
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Great write, your middle line is great. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck!
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whisper
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This is good.
I like the way you used the words
it flows well and i love the title.
thanks for entering and good luck! -
Truly expressive and profound... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.
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