I should know what to do
but I don't know what it is
I should know where to go
but I don't know where I am
I should know what I want
but I don't know how to get it
I should know what to say
but I can't say it outloud
I should know who I am
but everything just seems
hopefully lost
Please tell me what you think
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wonderful
i love how it repeats the should's and the don'ts it makes it so cohesive in confusion....i loved it i thought you had such a common feeling that isn't expressed in poetry a lot....well done...scars.
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An interesting write - a bit of a lament. A suggestion try "hopefully with an e." Happ trails.
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Thought at first this might be an Easter poem - hopfully, as opposed to hopefully. If you edits that and add the e it will make it more understanding. There are times when everything seems hopeless; sounds as if you are in one of those times now. remember too to add the apostrophe in don't, can't. Not quite a tongue twister, but almost. LOL
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dat wusz awesome iit reallii puts dat message out derr =]
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This is good i can relate to what your saying. Good write
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