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Internal Pond Scum

Crass cuts
to what was paralyzed
cause emergence cold

Sunk to onyx discord
drowning within closer voids

Blatantly puddles gather
overgrown by mildew
later to be skimmed

Author notes


'They slit our throats
Like we were flowers'
-MM-

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  • Naridill
    March 24, 2008

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    Short and fitted together well. The flow - calm but the insides intriguing.

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