Tonight I'm stuck in a dream and we are together,
So lets hold eachother tight and act like we never
Gave up on what we had spring time of last year.
And I never got the chance to say,
That I love you so.
So lets visit all of the places we used to go then.
We'll walk through this town in the night, and we will pretend,
nothing ever came between what we had then.
And I swear this time I'll say,
I love you so.
And one more hour of this night and dream will be over,
So lets carve our names right here.
And it'll last forever,
we'll last forever.
Cause I love you so.
Author notes
Love You So
Inspiration: Andrew Landon
Contest Entry
A contest entry
- Dark, Sad, Love, Loss, Suprise Me. by MrsJones.
350 points, ended March 21, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tempt My Heart - PW by Melissa Burns.
600 points, ended March 22, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The love of your life... by jbbrandi.
750 points, ended March 24, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Expressing Your Poetic Feelings by D Saul So Sexy.
550 points, ended March 31, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all the prewrites you want by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 150 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Much love. xoxo
Comments
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thanks mommy thiz waz tight i liked it and i am feelin some of these things so it was real to enter this
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Very nice. I like how it's sort of "seperated" by the line that always has the title in it. It's a nice touch. Good job, good luck in the contest(s), and thanks for entering!
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L-O-V-E it very good indeed, thank you for entering it into my contest. Thnks and good luck
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SORRY MELISSA!! I FORGOT TO PUT IN AN MY NAME..its xXgorgeous-insaneXx
much love
pixie -
Very pretty, I liked it alot. Very flowery and light and it brings you back to those times where you were young and in love. Thanks for entering.
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