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Sam

SAM is a fool
she sings like a toad
she likes to drool
she fell off a stool
she has a big load
SAM is a fool
she fails in school-(not)
her favorite room is the commode
she likes to drool
she thinks she is cool
she spits on the road
SAM is a fool
she swims in a pool
I'd love to see her implode
she likes to drool
she lost my favorite tool
she will soon corrode
SAM is a fool
she likes to drool

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I am weird sam is my friend

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  • peridotPixi
    August 13, 2008
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    I'm glad that you think your friend sam is weird, thats special,
    hopefully your freindship will continue to grow
    Keep writing
    ɛiɜ ~Amy

  • peridotPixi
    April 2, 2008
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    thats cool, i kinda like the decription you have in this poem allthough it seems a little repetitive, mayb eyou could take out some of the dooling and maybe add a few more words into the lines it will add depth to this poem, its a nice work in progress, keep it up -Amy


  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    This was a great poem. The rhyme was good, and I like the humour in this. I was having a bad day today, and reading this made me smile. Thanks for sharing a wonderful write!