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rapists

rapists...
hurting kids like perverts
pinning down, tieing up
stripping of clothing
stealing the innocence of kids and teens
kidnap, rape like a stupid criminal
rapists...
evil, horrid, dumb
prison is where they belong
or give them a death sentence

Author notes

this is a poem I came up with a week or two ago

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  • peridotPixi
    August 13, 2008
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    some people are sick and twisted
    Keep writing
    ɛiɜ ~Amy

  • peridotPixi
    April 2, 2008

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    i like the feelings and the deep emotions you have put into this poem it is so true and says a lot about your feelings. this poem has a nice flow and i like your choice of background with this, keep writing, -Amy


  • Alt
    March 19, 2008
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    good poem