Love of blood, blood of love.
Uncommon gift from above.
Silver eyes, beauty divine
Within my reach, it will be mine.
Dripping blood and searing pain
But it's worth it just the same.
Soothing words and gentle hands
Still holding you he stands.
"Don't worry it will pass little one."
The pain at last is finally done.
He takes you in his arms, smiles with joy
You return it, sweetly kissing your vampire boy.
Then he turns and has to run
Must return before the rise of sun.
Keen of claw and sharp of fang
Happiness over the hills has rang.
Now in silence you will lay
In his arms till' the end of day.
Oh, such a wonderful gift to behold
With pale skin that's always cold
It was meant to be
This gift of immortality
Always cold but heart of fire
The midnights inspire
I've fallen in love with a vampire!
A contest entry
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GREAT poem!!!
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WOW..........wat n awesome poem i couldn't eva rite sumthin so powerful i mean every word wuz filled wit passion wow love dis poem!!!!!!!!!
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cute
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heart warming
its like a song its beutiful i loved it. my fav parts were the begining all of it mostly. do u have anyother that sould or feel like this one felt this gives me inspration. what inspired u to write this down/type it?
Love of blood, blood of love.
Uncommon gift from above.
Silver eyes, beauty divine
Within my reach, it will be mine.
Dripping blood and searing pain
But it's worth it just the same.
Soothing words and gentle hands
Still holding you he stands.
"Don't worry it will pass little one."
The pain at last is finally done.
He takes you in his arms, smiles with joy
You return it, sweetly kissing your vampire boy.
Then he turns and has to run
Must return before the rise of sun.
Keen of claw and sharp of fang
Happiness over the hills has rang.
Now in silence you will lay
In his arms till' the end of day.
Oh, such a wonderful gift to behold
With pale skin that's always cold
It was meant to be
This gift of immortality
Always cold but heart of fire
The midnights inspire
I've fallen in love with a vampire!
the gifted of a vampire is a good one and a bad one there are things that u wish u could have bk and never would have done but HELL ITS STILL FUN AND THE LOVE OF UR LIFE IS WITH u so have fun that person in this song nice work on this
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very good
plz put ur author name in ur notes
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insperation
Vampire Hunter d bloodlust is what inspired me -
Wow!!!! I loved this! It was amazing! It had a lovely rhythm and reminded me quite a lot of Twilight. Amazing write really. Wish I could write something this good. Excellent write.
Infinate clappys 
Etc.
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Yes I do like it! What I don't like is some peoples insistance on ignoring my rules. *glare* Why do all of the really good poems do this to me? Is it because they know that they're so good that they think they can simply ignore the rules and still win? Do they not realize that no matter how much I love the poem I'm still going to follow my own rules?! Grrr...I enjoyed this very much, but if you don't fix it by the time I judge after school today, I'm not going to even put it in the finalists! Please fix it! Good job and good luck!
~Avan~
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"20) [1] Tell me about your experience with vampires."
does this not count?
what do i need to fix?
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im sarry im really lazy i must not have read all the rules. There was alot of stuff
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