I always sneeze when I smell roses
I sneeze and sneeze and hurt my little nose
I never stop sneezing
Once I smell a rose
I try to but the sneezing won't stop
I some times wonder what is going on up in my nose
Is It upset with me?
I don't know!
Sometimes it's like I sneeze all day
It's like my nose wants to have it's way
I sneeze and sneeze but I still never stop
What is going on!
It feels like my nose is going to drop
Drop out of my nose and run away
It's like I have been sneezing day after day
I want to stop sneezing but I don't know how to make it stop
The roses are not for you to smell my mom always say
Because you know it likes to have it's own way
You sneeze and sneeze and never stop
I have been waiting for this day to come
Finally I stop sneezing
what a relief
Good indeed
Author notes
GRAMMY AWARDS~FROM BRONZE TO GOLD
OPTION 4 CHILDRENS POETRY
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and under: WHAT GIVES YOU THE SNEEZIES? by Sky Prince Ireland.
900 points, ended March 31, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautiful upside down Bronze contest :) by paulcreates.
1200 points, ended April 5, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For the younger set: 12 and under only. by islekine.
600 points, ended May 8, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Need A Laugh by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Very Easy !!! by Loveandblessings2u.
1000 points, ended April 28, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Grammy Awards ~ From Bronze to Gold by Rebekah-Ann.
300 points, ended May 2, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Almost anything goes! by EmeraldDaze.
425 points, ended June 8, 2008, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ultimate Goal by N e a r.
20000 points, ended June 2, 2008, 946 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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cute rendition . . congrats on the trophies . . !!
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congrats on the trophies....such a good poem with sneezing...
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Tiki Cat knows what to do,
so very much unlike you
Don't smell roses at all, Wess
Then you'll pass the no-sneeze test
Tiki Cat
Buy Tiki Cat Food
"Too Good For Humans"
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There are many different things that make me sneeze - especially flowers - so I can relate to this poem very well! A sweet and also quite funny poem...
Thank you for sharing this!
Here's a rose for you:
Annie
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Such talent!!!
I'm glad you finally got to smell the rose!
Thank you for entering my contest. All the best for the rest you entered also. I think you have great talent...
Remember, a win in these contests only mean that your poem fitted a prompt. You don't need a tropy behind a poem to have a good poem!!!
Take care
Becks -
Stay away from the roses LoL,
Your poem is really very cute.
You should see a E.N.T. doctor about all that sneezing.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
good luck in my contest. -
I really enjoyed your poem...
Please read the rules carefully...I asked for a couple of things in the AN.
Write on!
*PEACE*
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awww now this is as cute as cute can be. I chuckled all the way through this. I've got allergies in the spring myself. The way you repeated phrases here over and over imitated the sneezings. lol
Nice!
Thank you for entering!
Paul -
Great pen.
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nice really well put. i love this poem!
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A very sweet take on sneezing. The beautiful perfume of roses is worth the sneezing that follows. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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This was very cute. Nicely done. You are so young, as you branch out you will get better keep up the great job.
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hahahaha!!! It was sooo cute! i loved it! wow! thanks for messageing me earlier. this was cute! =3 (hehehe)
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LOL....this is really good fun...thanks for the invite...
LOL
Simon
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It was a very cute poem. Great write.
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a very cute poem! good luck in the contest...
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This was a great poem. It made me laugh and think. You did a well job on this
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well done
well done!
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This is good poem I like flowers goodluck
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Wow that sounds like fun. What power these roses have on some people. Great poem. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.
Brian
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