The heat of jealousy and rage fills my soul
When I see you look at her and run your fingers through her hair
You used to look at me that way
You used to love me like you love her now
Then out of nowhere- fucking nowhere
You just want to be my friend?
I took it well at first until I saw just what you meant
She was so quickly by your side- I was so confused
What the Hell had I done?
I wasn't good enough for you!?
I called when you asked me too
I helped you with your when you need it most
This jealousy took over my life
And I still want you- passionately
I just can't see how she's better than me
Except maybe she's more beautiful, but beauty should not count...
Author notes
option 2 ( a little jealousy, a little rage)
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This is a very good piece but I felt like you were holding back just slightly... like you had more to say but you didn't...?
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