Down on one knee, a ring was given,
"yes" for you did say,
A future filled with happiness,
on this special day.
Starting out together,
along life's busy road,
Remember to take your dreams with you,
they lighten every load.
But this isn't a dream your in,
its love that is true,
Wishing you success and happiness,
until you say "I Do",
when all your dreams came true.
Author notes
For Chris and Alisha
A contest entry
- An Official Engagement Notice. by Poetryintheblood.
300 points, ended March 27, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice job. I liked how it expresses happiness for the future. I am sure the happy couple will like it. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, and helping make Chris and Alisha's day a special one, good luck, Josie
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This is a beautiful write hun, so much hope and happiness, it makes me think of when I got engaged. This is simply beautiful. I am sure this write will make the bride to be very happy. (hugs)
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Awww engagements are special. I wish the couple happiness and luck for the surprises ahead. There is lots to do before a wedding.
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