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No Release


Two of a kind,
you and I;

spinning in confusion
together we stand
so close,
yet so far.

Time
and distance seperate,
what could be,
with teasing possibilities,

of love...
   friendship...
passion...
        desire...


Flames within light
the indigo skies;

in the distance
I can see,
 
the burning passions
kept from my touch,
torturing my heart and soul.


Crystalized tears sit
upon my cheek,
as my heart grows cold;

no one,
   to love...
    to hold...
to comfort...
    to release me.

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About my Ex. BF Sage

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  • killa
    April 8
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    great job

    theres nothing wrong with embracing the dark,just stay in controle....
    beautifule peice!


  • PurplePixie
    March 21
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    this is such a pretty poem! I absoluely love it!


  • moons lunar angel gold member
    March 20
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    There is so much emotion in this piece. It's so sad


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    March 19

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    Beautifully written and emotionally expressive. Very impressive. I love the structure of this It glides down the page with ease.