Pristine
crystal waters
teeming with life
essential.
Survive.
Author notes
dustookie2
Spawning coral picture link;
www.sciencedaily.com/images/2007/10/071019093814.jpg
A contest entry
- Enter your last posted poem by whispernthedark.
425 points, ended March 22, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lol I at least remember
those I have read the two before this one were read, I feel bad so few out of so many, this one speaks alot with so few words
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Hood-Winked!
Sorry I am late but I have been sick, but wanted to join in the ambush too. What a wonderful and amazing write! Such vivid imagery and emotion and I loved the picture too. Keep up the amazing writing
Theresa
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So much truth in very few words...The survival of the life in the waters of the Earth are so very inflicted in the life's survival of us all...Yet no one ever even realizes it...You have penned a powerful message of truth here and a truth that all should take personally...
Blessings Sis
~CherylAnn~
I am truly sorry that I have been slipping on my commenting lately as I have been battling inner demons...
Love you much and hope all is well...
~CherylAnn~
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wow great poem not very long but it was great i love the pic wonderful i the pic is soo full of life and soo is your poem i love it..great write love how you use not very many words but yet you get the point across very good enjoyed it
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beautiful poem. Short and sweet, too the point. love the writing format to it. Simple words bring out the photo so well.
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hoodwinked!
first off, i love that picture! it is so pretty!
you have sumed up such a beautiful and deep topic with just a few words! i really like the word choice, it illustrates the concept very well!
great write!
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Hood-wink !!
Beautiful... just beautiful.
You are saying so much within this poem's briefness... It's amazing.
Thanks so much for sharing this, I enjoyed it.
Keep on writing!
Annie
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Excellent
Terrific expression for the image. Best of luck in the contest. -
Hood-Winked!
How very true, water is one of the main essentials of life and survival. Your simplicity and emotions is very stunning.
Enjoy the hoodwink, animated
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Hoodwink
What a stunning picture to go with an equally stunning poem. I love this piece, this might sound weird but it really made me think and i like that about a poem. Great job with this piece dear poet keep it up.
Always write from the heart
Never give up
Kate
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Hood Winked
This is a stunning write it says so much in so few words. It fits the picture to the tee. I am delighted to read it today. I would not of thought to put those words to this picture. Keep up the great work.
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HOODWINKED !!
This is a lovely poem/picture package, mutually complimentary and meaningful. Well Done!
You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE! Hope to read more of your delightful work.
Dennis
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Hoodwinked
Coral are beautiful. They make nice jewelry. I wish you luck in the contest and best wishes on all your future writing endeavors. -
You have been HOOD WINKED by the Poetic Bandits. Enjoy your day in the spotlight. What a lovely presentation this is- great color choices. Loved the lines too.
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I love this poem, It frees the soul and the mind
To live on with elegance awsome write.
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The ocean has to be one of the most amazing places and you have captured the depth and beauty of it. Best of luck in the contest.
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Beautiful
Oh how I love the ocean. What a lovely poem with so few words with pearls of wisdom. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me. Picture is beautiful, I love coral!!
Much Love
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Awesome and perfect description of coral. Great job. Best of luck in the contest my good bad girl.
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You captured the picture well. Your imagery is good, but your last lines seem abrupt. I'm not sure if this is because of form rules if this is a form poem, but it stilts the poem a little. Thank you very much for entering the contest.
♥
whisper
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Excellent
Very creative and so well expressed. Thank you for sharing
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describes how i feel on a daily basis. beautiful!
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