Flowing of a crystalline depth
Sweetness entertwined with
Pleasant tastelessness
A purity so tangible
So cold yet so clear
Something that could have only been dreamed up
But wake up and its sliding
down
your
window
Slickness clothing your naked body
With stings of diamonds
That roll down the spine with
Such intensity yet such gentleness
As it quenches a thirst that a kiss
Cannot fill
A contest entry
- EVERY OPTION KNOWN TO MANKIND!!! TAKE A LOOK! by Salig Flicka.
735 points, ended March 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
contest 2: water
Comments
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AH! I hate when this happens. An excellent poem, which captivated me from beginning to end, had me imagining both images and feelings, and then ignored the rules. I'm not judging until after school, so if you fix it by then I promise I won't cry. Did I mention this is REALLY GOOD?! Please fix it, and BOL.
~Avan~
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