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On the Radio

Your voice transmits across the airwaves,
reaching those headed toward dead ends.

Providing company for people driving alone,
You give us a reason to keep going.

You are heartbroken when we switch channels,
choosing something we'd rather hear instead.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I turned the radio dial and listened in
to find some meaning amidst the static.

I know You’ve got global coverage,
yet at times I can’t pick up your signal.

I wish I was more in tune with You,
but You may be on a different frequency.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 20, 2008

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    This is great can't quite decipher if this is metaphorically written or not.
    Anyhow still I like this thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck. ahh well know i see what you were speaking off lol took me a minute


  • leander Moderators member
    March 20, 2008

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    Another poem that shows a great and wonderful use of these technical things, and created strong and relatable feelings with it. well done

    • Metaphorist
      March 20, 2008
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      Thanks so much Hope you're doing better

      Now I'm thinking about a poem using statistics terms. There's something slightly off about me.

      • leander Moderators member
        March 20, 2008
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        I'm doing good - my back and ribs aren't
        I've never seen that many different shades of red and blue all together on a body I tell ya

        thanks for asking


  • going nowhere
    March 19, 2008

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    WONDERFUL! oh.. i loved this! how many times i feel like i choose something other than Him and keep switching stations to find what i think i want to hear...
    one of my favorites by you... and bookmarking!


    • Metaphorist
      March 19, 2008
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      Darn! That's what I wanted to say in the third couplet. Can I steal it?

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