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Free or Nothing More

The bars that incase me
comfort my thoughts
as I ponder, when
Demise Decides My Time.
I imagine the ways
it will end-
whose hands will take me
be it theirs or....
Mine

***

The fabric holds strong
its grip tightening

pushing against Adam's apple

Limp in a substance unseen

My breathe escaping in silence

as my colors change

white to red

soon that's all i see

then i will be free.


***
Clamps hold my wrists
and lock my feet in place-
Stuck in this wooden chair
a wet towel over my brow,
knowing that now
as the hat touches my head--
A light flashes before my eyes...
No
In my eyes to the core,
Then.....nothing more.

***
I'm set in straps.
My bolted bed surrounded by doctors,
Like proctors judging me.
A mosquito stings,
I drift to sleep-
And awake no more.....

 

***

Tonight I must decide

Free

or

Nothing More








 

Author notes

contest 4 option 1
"I'm a little teapot, short and green"
"Glow in the dark nail polish"
"I have read the rules, understand, and agree to abide by them." (Im lying some of them make no sense)

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Can you name what he imagines

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  • Hata mig
    March 24, 2008

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    Heehee...all of the rules made perfect sense thank you very much.

    Back to your poem though, - wow. I never would have thought of putting these situations with it! I thought it was fantastic! I started reading and was like, "Okay another poem with fancy words and blah blah-woa! Wazat?!" (I've been reading a lot of poems by now and so it's nice to have something refreshing such as this.)

    Ehem, I do believe that the first situation is being hanged. The second...the electric chair, and the final lethal injection. Am I right? Where's my prize!? Wait, that's right, I'm handing out the prizes...Anyway, good job and best of luck!

    ~Avan~