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Heartless Bastard

"You don't have emotions, you just act like you do"
said the Girlfriend
"You don't know your brothers pain, you're a heartless bastard"
said the mother
"You have never known regret, you can't know us"
Said the friends

"My friends my mother and my love"
I shall say
"I have seen the error of my ways"
and together they will say
"Deception is sitting across the table from us"

And they shall speak the truth, for i have no heart

And my deception is an art

For if i must fiegn defeat to keep control

God Forbid they see me whole

 

God forbid they know they serve me

That they do my will alone

or i else i shall be overthrown

and so again i feign defeat or be alone

 

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  • carmel apple
    March 25, 2008
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    Well I am trying to figure out if this is actually personal.. Which its really good.


    • Krick
      March 25, 2008
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      well i have been called a heartless bastard by my mother
      and one of my ex=gfs once said i dont have feelings i'm just good at acting like i do. so it is personal

  • yourguardianangel
    March 21, 2008

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    nice!!

    I love this..poems rarely satiate me but this did just that..it was very relatable and I like the story/reality that was dually incorporated


  • grapefruite
    March 19, 2008
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    very nice. check spelling!


  • KayJay
    March 19, 2008
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    Love your take... great poetry.

    Ken

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