Crescent moon mounts lighty pressing,
extracting radiant response
as fear droplets are penetrating
unfamiliar limbs entwine ensconced.
Pain, once put aside
chooses to paralise,
smothering sensitivity,
suppressing desired harmony.
A lifetime lived restrained,
what gain? to relive past pain
in an ashen desolate for one domain.
Let doubt depart and trust remain,
I beg, transform, elevate me
from shrieking singularity!
Nurturing one, innate understanding;
won precious intimacy tenderly shared,
untamed growth freely abounding,
damaging suckers ripped and furled.
Clinging close all fear deminished
penetrating deep a love that binds,
allowing both to feel and cherish,
cultivating commitment to each as he finds.
Author notes
Picure inspired
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired-Beautiful by sweetgirlwa.
1500 points, ended March 20, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow!!! this is beautiful!!!
very well penned indeed, and i love that touch of uniqueness you add to it!! i hope you enter this in 1000000000000000, 00000000000, 00000 ZILLION contests, and the trophies will pile up in no time!! your style is unique and special and fantastic... well done!
xx
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Ah..this is indeed a piece written by the pen of the heart itself..you touched the depth of the image..well done...
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a beauty of love and a beuty of poetry is amamalmated in each other to bring the beauty of life....
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This is a very sweet poem. It brings a beauty to mind, yet brings something else as well. You are able to show a mulitude of things within your poem.
Good job and good luck! -
This is such a lovely piece of aritistry that others that I have read today pale in comparison. The vivid words you used were perfection. I also loved the picture, such a lovely picture that could inspire even those with writers block, like I have. Any way, I do hope you win the contest because it is a beautiful piece of poetry. Great job and good luck.
Hugs and Kisses,
Tiphanie -
Oh dear...so lovely I am speechless. This I will bookmark for sure. The first line is incredible. The twelfth line is a little awkward, though I like the effect of the word 'elevate' in there.
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