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Anticipation

Eternity passes in an instant
When I am with you
Stay with me
Please don’t go
Stay here in this place
Of kisses and dreams
Of light and redemption
Forever with me
Until every instant
Is an eternity to spend with
You

(You went)

Instants take an eternity to pass
When I am not with you
Return to me
I need you here
I need you to hear me
When I call your name
And whatever your reply will be the sweetest
Word I will have ever heard
Until every instant
Is an eternity to spend with
You

Author notes

This is another poem about my angel, Michael.

I'd like to be your AP sister, if you'll have me.

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  • neurosine gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    sort of feel ech about this. It's very sentimental. Not to say there's any philosophical, or certainly acedimic wrongness in it...just to say it turns me off sometimes.


  • Zenda-Lokki
    March 19, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry. This is a great poem. Very well written. Would be fantastic to have another sister x Michael would surely love it, as I do too.


    • Kokaze
      March 19, 2008
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      Do only the winners become part of your family?


      • Zenda-Lokki
        March 20, 2008
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        No, Winners become members and other entrants will be asked if I loved their poems and didn't have enough trophies to give them one lol xx Never know, I may want to add you all to my family lol

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