Stilled
listless hands I coveted
Distilled
venoms that you wept
Author notes
10 words. Prompt was mortuary. I think it's a good choice word for it's meaning.. it sort of feels thick when you say it.
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not quite sure about this one ... coveted means popular, desirable, not quite sure where it fits in in this piece
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"3. to have an inordinate or wrongful desire."
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